ICW 11/15/2011

The only changes I made to my paper were ones that I realized I needed to make based on re-reading my paper. I switched two of my paragraphs and moved another one in order to make my paper flow better and I also reformed some sentences to make them make more sense. The sample student essay did help me especially with where to place my paragraphs and ended up helping my paper flow much better and become easier to understand. Unfortunately I was unable to get my peer review until early this morning so that did not have any effect on my revisions. The strongest aspect of my paper would probably be my introduction as I was able to find a lot of good facts on illegal immigration to set the stage for my paper. I would say the thing i am most concerned about would be the viewpoints. I could only really come up with two strong viewpoints either for or against illegal immigrants and because the paper asked for 4 viewpoints I struggled to find information supporting the other two.