Peer Review Workshop

My main concern about my Rhetorical Analysis is that I summarized the book to much and possibly did not go into quite as much depth about the writing. This was because I was concerned about the length of the paper at first and making sure I hit the 4 page requirement. Also I may not have used enough examples straight from the text. I would also like to know if my paragraphs seem to make my paper flow. When I was going back through my paper I moved a couple paragraphs around but then moved some of them back cause I was not sure how to make them transition to my next point. Also my thesis probably could be worded better. And lastly I would like to know if my title is effective for my piece.